Today I had a normal day as usual,I did my attendance,finished editing my previous post and went to town hall to start my day off but wait lets get to the exciting part which is when we all walked off to waiata hui where we surprisingly met a visitor.The visitor was from ormiston junior collage next door to ormiston primary school,he was here to give out certificates to the learners who had participated in the ormiston junior collage logo competition and also to announce the winner who is going to get 100 bucks(dollars).So first he introduced himself and then started to hand out the certificates first he called
out:Maanvi,Mervlyn,Ashmira,and Seletine from LH1,then lastly MY name I had almost forgotten I actually took part in that competition because it was last term!anyways once he had called my name I was completely shocked but that wasn't the actual shocking part because after I had stood up while going to the center to collect my certificate the visitor had announced ME as the overall winner,I almost shed tears of joy THINKING about it yes it was only a dream just KIDDING!.I just couldn't believe it was happening in reality if you were in my place you feel the same because its a proud moment of your LIFE.Once the day the day was over I couldn't stop myself from telling my mom and my dad also including THE NEIGHBORS! you might be thinking Vrishti you might have gone slightly MAD yes but I can't resist the happiness of 100 DOLLARS!
Thank you for reading.Hope you have a lovely day
By:Vrishti
LH3
To:Vrishti
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog because It was descriptive.
Something you could work on is Making paragraphs.
I also like it because you had good language features.
From : Nisita
To nisita
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting
Vrishti,I'm very surprised that you wrote a very long blog for a day which is about the visitors from Ormiston Junior College.Maybe next time you should put a space for paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteDear Vrishti
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you put capital letters on
Also how you included you might be thinking .....
Next time work on punctuation